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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using knowledge about the game to determine your actions as a character in role play.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: declaring that your action is successful that effects another characters role playing.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Miriel Nelyafeyra
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 83
Physical Description: -Long Brown Hair
-Dark blue eyes
-pale skin, but for a elf has a uncommon amount of light freckles
-5'8
-High Elf
-Lithe and quiet
Screenshot of Skin:



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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- You seem to be a tad confused; LotC is NOT Lord of the Rings. Lord of the Craft has its own story and lore, completely separate from LotR. You may find the wiki helpful in learning more about the LotC lore. ❤️

WIKI

- Your powergaming and metagaming definitions aren’t quite what I am looking for... Please clarify and expand upon these, making sure to include an example for each! Here are the links to the correct definitions, just be sure not to plagiarise! ❤️

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
 

- Your character can’t really be 1158 years old, as certainly by the age of 1000 they would have either died, or fallen into complete madness.. I would advise making them much younger, with 50 being the age that an elf is considered a young adult, 100 being when they have passed their first century, their ‘human years’ so to put it, and 500 when elves become totally infertile.

 

- Your bio is very short, and does not seem to contain any lore references; please do fix this, remembering that the LotC lore is independent and different from LotR lore. Please extend your bio to at least 6 sentences, and make sure to include lore references! (these can be city names, important events, etc.) The wiki may be helpful in finding these ❤️

WIKI

- Personally, I wouldn’t advise making your character an elf without a subrace, unless they are a mix between subraces. This can often be frowned upon, though, with some elves disliking mixed subraces etc. The wiki might assist you in finding more info about this.

WIKI

- Your character description of having ‘long blonde hair’ doesn’t seem to really fit with your skin (from what I can tell, the skin you are using seems to have brown hair,,). Please edit this to fit accordingly, and if you need, you may wish to use the LotC Skin Archives to find a skin that you can use, edit, or reference from, for your character.

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/
 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!

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