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Avery_Aatani
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Character Name: Avery Aa'tani Cylhadhras
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Read Below... :D
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Just finished my new skin! Was able to add features to the eyes and hair and along with the supremely fashionable dress. The Ear Crowns have been added that go up the side of her temples on BOTH sides and elongate at her head. Her hair is all pulled to one side and she wears no shoes... well... at least with this dress she doesn't. 

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- Placed on Pending because

 

Applying with Magic

Your character can not have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server! Please make the proper revisions so that they follow under the guidelines of the request.

 

The whole section on elements can be removed, there's really no such thing in the server.

Iblees also hasn't been around for a long while, and it's not really something seen in the server to be personally haunted by him.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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I'd be happy to take out the entire part of the magic, but my character doesn't have any form of training or understanding of magic. I said it may be applicable for the future of my character. As for Iblees goes I can take it out no problem and reformat the situation with the death of my Mother to a simple raid and capture and gruesome death of my mother to save me. Should I repost or is that good enough? @Gaia_

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New Edit...

 

Character Bio… 

 

*Important Details of Avery's Childhood*

 

Avery Born/Captured by a pack of Orcs to do a Blood Sacrifice of an Elf (Mother came in and sacrificed herself)

 

They Raid the Aa'tani Estate and capture Avery as she sleeps, they are about to sacrifice her when her Mother comes in and kills them all but is then struck through the heart with an Orcish Blade. Her Mother is able to then place her down on a patch of grass before falling completely. Avery's Father steps in with an estate guard and they rescue Avery and clean the scene.

 

Avery experiences extreme and strong visual representations of the capture and of the killing of her Mother throughout her childhood and begins to suppress them

 

Avery continues to live on with her darkness of her trauma, though it only grows in the furthest parts of her mind giving her a "dark" counter part

 

She enlists in a Personal Tutor and takes up responsibility around the household finally being granted to take up her Grand-Mothers tradition in keeping house and being able to observe her Fathers business.

 

She is thrown a huge celebration for her 18th party where she changes her name to Cylhardhas

 

Uncles come and stay with Father as he’s very depressed

 

Avery is trained by Uncles and tutors and grows up in house

 

At 18th birthday changes her name to honor her mother and decides to finish her schooling to “travel” and be more worldly

 

She goes to the Academy at Holm and graduates third in her class and returns home (This is where she finds her pet)

 

@Gaia_

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On behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a white-listed player. Please wait patiently as a staff member will implement you. In the meantime feel free to browse our wiki or if you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

 

Our AT Discord is tailored especially to assist new players. To get in you simply have to click the link provided. Please stop by and say hi! New Player Discord

 

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