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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: SpaghettiLord#9947
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-Gaming is the process of using knowledge that you as a person know, but your character knows. It's a huge immersion breaker.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-Gaming is performing unrealistic actions as a character. One must think before acting. Can 1 lvl3 beat up a dragon? Heck no.
    Status: Accepted

Fraeori darts his head around the market. Looking for potential spell-casting materials or books. His eyes fixate on the merchant speaking to him. After a quick moment of consideration and putting his thoughts together he replies “I am here for my own reason. I guess it could be adventure? that being said. May you have something for someone my type?” Fraeori pulls out his book of spells. Hoping the merchant may catch on and see if he has any more magical goods.


Character Name: Fraeori
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 53
Physical Description: Dark Red hair, scraggly. A thin beard. Golden eyes. Defined muscles, bigger than average. 6'4.
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  • Your Character Backstory should have at least one lore reference 

  • Your Character Skin should appear to be a Wood Elf, darker in hue 


 

The overall look of your application has good backing to it and is also fairly well put together, I like what it provides so far. I feel that it could just be a bit more personal than what it has so far! You have a 24-hour period to fix anything that was listed above, if you need more time, feel free to let me know.

 

 The Character Backstory should not include you with a magical item, though once in the game, feel free to explore your options to find and seek out the said item. It should also include one lore reference on where your character was from and truly flesh out the story of them! In terms of the skin, Wood Elves should appear darker in hue and less pink in here, I have linked the Skin Archive to help you have a better idea on what pigment your elf should have.  

 

Our server wiki page has a large number of resources that you can utilize to fill out the backstory you can provide us your character! Feel free to join our New Player Discord and chat with Community staff with any questions that you have!

 

If you have any personal questions you’d like to ask me, feel free to pm me on discord: Damo#2886 

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I have added 3 lore related threads to my lore and changed my race (I meant it to be Elf, not wood elf) The Lore threads being my character has a patron while the general consensus is to no higher worship in the town he grew up in and a reference to the city he grew up in, and a reference to the world itself. I also removed mention of the aforementioned magical weapon leaving room for character development. I look forward to your reply.

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Welcome to LoTC, while you are accepted the white-listing integration may take a moment. So feel free to check out the New Player Guide 

Perhaps join our New Player Discord for any questions or concerns you may have. 

 

Feel free to contact me Damo#2886 on discord with any questions you may have or any Community Team Member

 

Join our New Player Discord! Make some new friends and feel to ask any sort of questions you might need answers to or if you have any issues in-game Ask for a Wilven Monk and any of the Community Team will be more than happy to help you out. 

 

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