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    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is when someone will message you and inform you about say they are killing another player. So you go and join in, but there is no way your character could have known it. It's like ooc news it's not IC
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is forcing your emotes on your roleplay partners. For example, if I were to be in CRP and suddenly lunged at a person like " The redhead leaped at the small newbie and started stabbing them with no remorse until they fell to the ground." < no
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Dulcina
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Dulcina has green eyes and her lips are a gentle nude pink. She’s short and holds an hourglass figure, platinum blonde long hair
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  1. Your biography is nice and I like it, the only problem with it is that there is none of the servers lore, could you please add some. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. Could you add onto your interesting facts please and make them a little longer.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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Alright, I added a bit of the lore into the Biography! I hope the small bit I added is enough. so you don’t have to search this is what I added VV

  Dulcina was a perfect slave. She was beautiful and stubborn. No one enjoyed a slave who obeyed every command, they seemed to like the fire she held. She was a Highlander human. The race was normally known for better status’s but her natural beauty had poisoned her future. Since she had been old enough to think she remembered being a slave, and trying to run away. Only once did she manage to break free and she had tried to travel to one place she felt would keep her safe. She ran towards Carolustadt. She knew it was the perfect place to find her freedom. Before the slave could make it there, she had tripped and hurt her leg pretty bad and in the end, got caught. She planned to try again when she had healed fully. Her time had come finally after two months of planning, the guard was finally at the touch of her fingers. 


I also made the special facts a bit longer as well! Like you asked! I hope this is better :D! – Thank you for your time!

 

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