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Idakiller
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is having more power over other players in game. Meta gaming is knowing things that you could not know in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is unrealistic power. It is also like forcing players to take action. For example, if I’m fighting someone and they say “[my character] chop off left arm” without me giving me the time to respond.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Dryadalis Deck
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Dryadalis is a high elf that is tall 5’11’’ pointy ears. Has straight teeth. Has 10 fingers. Also blonde with bright blue eyes. Speaks common, smart.
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-Please assure that your character has a real name, rather than your username of minecraft. If you look at my character name for example, her name is ‘Raewynn Vihael’. You can see here that she has both a first and surname.

 

-Please make sure that you contain more depth within your biography, this includes more detail of his ambitions, what his life was like growing up, what struggles he was faced with etc. 

 

-You must include one more example of lore within your biography, this could be what language he speaks that is included within our server or what religion he believes in. I have already seen you have included the place he is from, the lands of Haelun’or – that’s a good start.

 

-In your character description, he cannot have ‘perfect human teeth’ since you have listed him as a high elf, please also make sure you include more physical descriptions of your character. 

 

-English is not a language recognized on our server, instead we call it ‘common’. 

 

-Please correct both your metagaming and powergaming definition as they are currently incorrect.

 

-Please include more of a hindering weakness in your character’s interesting facts, as not all characters are perfect.

 

 

If you need any further assistance please do let me know upon the forums, in-game (/msg TheIchorDruid) or my discord Rae#3015.

 

We also encourage new players to join the new player discord where you can chat to other new players, veterans of the community and other fellow community team members. Simply click here: https://discord.gg/QAdhdT

 

Another thing we also recommend is to read through our new-player handbook which contains all the vital information upon the server that you may be at current, unsure of. Simply click here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/179894-new-player-guide/?pagecomment1690465=1

 

You have 24 hours to make the following changes, failure to meet the given deadline will result in your application being automatically denied.

Once these changes have been made please do message me upon the variant of options provided above.

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Changes still need to be made!

 

The punctuation of your biography is mainly filled with short sentences, please have another read through it and make it flow more like a story rather than what currently sounds like a list of facts.

 

Another 24 hours will be granted to make these changes!

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