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• Keep in mind that in LOTC, the major mention of powegaming comes in the form of power-emoting. Players who refuse to roll dice in chance events, or play fair, are the main perpetrators. WIth that in mind, your definition isn’t wrong.
• Prostitution is against the rules of LOTC. Being from a mother with such a background is fine, but I’d ask you reword that piece of your story. Instead, perhaps use something like “born to a common mother, and to a father who is unknown.”
• The only real mention of the lore of the server is that of Carolustadt. At nineteen, the charatcer has seen a map change- there are plenty of other little details that could be added.
• Whilst not mandatory, a surname would be welcomed. Surely even his mother had one? If not, something like stone might work in place.
• The positive in your interesting facts is less of a personality trait, and more of a piece of his person. Consider something positive about his personality instead.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

1 hour ago, Lirinya said:

Changed Status to Pending

I’ve changed it. I wasn’t sure what to add lorewise, the wiki seems pretty barebones and confusing.

Something as simple as more names of cities. Perhaps referencing leaders that existed at that time, or races. Just something generic works. But the wiki is very full and busy, so it’s entirely understandable.

Otherwise, you’re looking good to go.

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