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Wizardmagicgo

By Wizardmagicgo

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: MatthewTheMatt#7834
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when -discord
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when -discord
    Status: Accepted

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Callius looks at the man and raises his eyebrows and takes a step back and answers the gentleman “Well.. I am looking for a mage to teach me the art of magic” he takes a water bottle from his satchel and chugs down the bottle before he continues “Why do you ask?” and before the gentleman has a chance to speak he says “Wait...” He gets exited “you don’t happen to know anyone who does do you?! If you did that would be so....” his voice would begin to rush as he gets exited and looks down pacing around“ you see.. I have been wanting to learn magic m- my whole life! and if you did know anyone that could possibly teach me magic I would be forever grateful and-“ Callius pauses and realizes that he is getting carried away and exhales “Sorry I’m just exited to be here but to answer your question... I am here to find magic.. why do you ask?”                                                                   zGga3BP.png

Character Name: Callius Brightwind
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: emerald green eyes, raven black hair, pale skin, is 5'9 tall, wears a soft and thin blue jacket over a white shirt and a satchel, fit body type.
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camocat9

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is super close, though it’s not quite there. It just needs to be made a little more clear! Take a look at our wiki’s definition again and try to clarify your response/example.
  • Your Character Biography states that your character was born with white hair. Humans cannot be naturally born with white hair. Please change this accordingly. If you need more information on humans, please check the link below,
  • Your Character Biography states that a mage changed their hair color from it’s natural color to black. This is not a possible type of magic on LOTC. Your character also cannot be effected by magic in their backstory.
  • Your Character Biography states that left to join a group of highly trained elven mages. Even if they did not learn anything, it is unlikely that a 17 year old human boy would be invited to such a group. Even if it was likely, your character cannot claim to have been part of a magical organization in their backstory, even if it was only for a short time.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. I feel as if this is what you were going for with your character being jealous, but it needs to be made more clear that this is a significant negative trait, (’irrationally jealous’ or something similar would be better).
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. It does not appear to have any shading. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @camocat9#9373 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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camocat9

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @camocat9#9373 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

[!] The player has provided Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions on Discord due to them being too long for the application page.

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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camocat9

 

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

 

Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg camocat9, or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord @camocat9. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

 

After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
 

/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

 

When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

 

I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

 

In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race. 

 

If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

 

[!] Player has provided Metagaming and Powergaming definitions on Discord.

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