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Basttiiaan


Basttiiaan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Weeb-San#5758
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when someone knows the new best strat for example
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: where someone doesnt act like their affected by magic per say and just kills the player
    Status: Denied

i came to train myself more to find my brother and find those who killed my people


Character Name: Bakkick DrakeFury
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: red eyes short black hair decently muscular Height: 4FT 2 Weight: 219 always wearing blue fur cloak over some armor
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  • Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
  • Please refrain from using Clichés in your character’s backstory, such as their village being destroyed, unless you are referencing a specific example of a village that has been on the server in the past which was destroyed by a dragon. Villages on the server very rarely get destroyed like that and if something like that happened it would be an extremely big event which would be remembered. Since, to my knowledge, this has never happened on the server before, your character will struggle to fit into the world because their backstory won’t align with it’s history.
  • Your character’s Background is too vague and doesn’t give a good enough outline of what your character is like, what skills they possess, etc. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
  • You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
  • Your character Description should be written in full sentences. This field can be viewed by other players in game.
  •  Your response to the Roleplay Scenario could do with a bit more development. Try to think of what your character would realistically say in response to the man’s question. There are very few people who reveal everything about themselves and their backstory as their first words to a complete stranger. Perhaps your character would respond with suspicion or curiosity to the man’s queries, or ignore him completely. You also need to describe at least one action in your response and wrap your character’s speech in speech marks.
  • Your character’s Appearance does not fit the server’s lore for mountain dwarves as mountain dwarves don’t have red eyes – please take a look at the wiki page on mountain dwarves before you submit any more changes. Also remember that the eye colour in your physical description needs to match your skin, which it doesn’t at the moment. 

 


 

 

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

 

 


 

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

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You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

 

 


 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

 

 


 

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.


 

You may reapply at any time.

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