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BlobPlan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Blob Plan#6751
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: the use of info needed out-of-character, in-character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: carrying out of unrealistic actions.
    Status: Denied

You smile at the gentleman. You say, "I'm just visiting a friend. He wanted some help from me." After that, you walk to your friend's house. you knock on the door. Nobody answers.


Character Name: Plan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Black hair, cyan eyes, green hoodie, red shorts, black t-shirt, blue shoes.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ You can’t wear such colourful modern clothes as this is medieval times.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences.

→ Your characters biggest fear should be at least two sentences. 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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