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BrickFixer
  • Rules: No
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Basically breaking the forth wall and giving up the immersion.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: This is the immersion of the characters, world, and History all together.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Zaceria Yuur
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Just a traveling butcher/trader. Always done for an opportunity to make money.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions aren’t quite what I’m looking for.. Please do correct/expand these, and add examples ❤️ The links to the definitions are here, just make sure to not plagiarise!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

- Your bio only seems to include one lore reference, please make sure to edit this include at least 2 in total ❤️ For example, another city name, a large event, etc.

- It says that your character is ‘cursed’, please define what you might mean by this, as your character cannot literally be cursed. Might you perhaps mean it as a mental issue that he is suffering from in response to his past? ❤️ Please do clarify here.

- In your interesting facts, I am not quite sure what you mean by ‘can lash out in certain situations’. If you are referring to the issues that you mention in your bio, might you be able to clarify this? ❤️ thank you!

- Your character description should be a physical description of what they look like, e.g. eye colour, hair colour, prominent physical features, etc. Please edit this ❤️

- Your skin doesn’t seem to be very suitable for the server,, You might wish to have a look in the LotC Skin Archives, where you can find open use skins that you can use or make edits to so they fit your character ❤️

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, the 24hr editing time has expired... Don’t worry though, you are free to reapply straight away, just fixing all the things specified above. ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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