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Fredward

By Fredward

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Fredward🐊#0994
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using outside knowledge to bolster your character's personal understanding
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Using an unfair emote to create an OP character, do something which breaks the lore, or unfairly disadvantage others to give yourself a leg up.
    Status: Denied

Sheepishly, Tobias studied the man from head-to-toe, and decided perhaps he should take a knee.

"Hello, sire. I am here to, um, find adventure, love, and perhaps my place in this world."

As Tobias finished his words, he returned to standing with a stiff and nervous posture,

"Perhaps if your elegance is not too busy... you could direct me to the nearest armor smith?"

Character Name: Tobias
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Average height, slightly muscular build with fiery red hair, and a short beard with braids coming down from the sides of the chin
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Please include an example for your metagaming and powergaming definition.

→ Please don’t include any reference to mages, magic, etc… in your application.

→ Please remove the part from your application where it says a Noble took him in and raised him. You can’t be raised under by a Noble in your application.

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ The rule you don’t understand just means that you can’t take from item stands or item frames unless you do a heist. A heist is when you make an application to go rob a specific place for a specific reason. You can find additional information about this in the server rules or by contacting a Moderator. If you still require clarification about this rule, then please feel free to send me a message on the forums or on Discord @HogoBojo#0001.

→ A human can’t have red hair.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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