chocaria

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For the following reason(s):

Ø  Please read the following definitions, and rewrite them using your own words. When doing so, also provide me a clear example in a roleplaying context for each one.

• Metagaming
• Powergaming
   

Ø  Your biography is too short, and a bit too vague. I want you rewrite it, and come up with a more detailed and unique backstory for your character. Make sure your new biography is longer than your current one. I want to see a paragraph of atleast seven sentences long, instead of a collection of sentences.

Ø  When rewriting your biography, make sure you include atleast two references to the server lore! The server lore can be found here, on the wiki. Below is a list of specific pages and information which could be useful for your new biography!

• Arcas, the current realm we are playing on.
   
• At the moment, the in rp year is 1717. The start of Arcas dates back to 1705, meaning that your character would’ve most likely been born on the previous realm, Atlas.
   
• Alternatively, your character could’ve hailed from Aeldin. It is a realm which you are unable to play on, but is still implemented in the lore. Do note that Atlas has a lot more backstory, as the events and cities in this realm’s also took place in game.
   
• The Human lore.

Ø  Two of your interesting facts (”absolute mad lad” and “idk hes cool”) do not really reflect your character as a person. I want you to change these two, and make them more specific and realistic. Make sure they reflect your character’s personality. For these interesting facts, make sure make one of them neutral, and the other one positive.

Ø  One final note. Because your character has a prostetic arm, be sure you remember he can’t properly use it. The server’s setting is that of a medieval-fantasy world. There are various ways to have a prostetic arm that can move, but those can only be obtained once accepted onto the server!

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

You can join our New Player Discord  – Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

Your application has been

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

You may reapply immediately, but please take some time to fix all of the requested changes.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), my forum account, or on the server (marb121).

You are also encouraged to join our New Player discord, a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staf, and mix with the general LOTC community.