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DankShot
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: DankShot#5506
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using info gained oocly icly.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Invincibility and forcing an emote onto someone or something where it wouldn't make sense.
    Status: Denied

I would ask who he was and why he is interested in me. If I liked his answer I would tell him to find out my purpose in life.


Character Name: Zerqollo
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Zerqollo has medium length straight white hair, yellow eyes, fair complexion, and his hair is parted as to not cover his ears.
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

Your Metagame and Power Gaming definitions are correct but you need to add an example to both! Let me know if you need help thinking of examples! 

 

You defined roleplay but you forgot to answer the question ‘Have you ever role played before?’ If it is a yes make sure you list where you have roleplayed before!

 

You need at least 10 sentences on your character biography! What your idea was is totally cool, but you still need to have 10 sentences. If you need help coming up with ideas for that, feel free to message me!

 

Your Character Biography is missing some Lore References! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charter

 

Your characters Physical Description needs to have a little more detail. Add some weight, height, and change the eye color. Then you should be solid!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

 

Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

 

Your character's Biggest Fear should be changed. Everyone has a fear of death because everyone has a natural aversion of death. If you need help coming up with ideas for the biggest fear, you can reach out to me!

 

Make sure you list Two Things that your character likes about itself and two things your character doesn't like about itself. 

 

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord zuziee#4323 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

› Your Metagame and Power Gaming definitions are correct but you need to add an example to both! Let me know if you need help thinking of examples! 

› You defined roleplay but you forgot to answer the question ‘Have you ever role played before?’ If it is a yes make sure you list where you have roleplayed before!

› You need at least 10 sentences on your character biography! What your idea was is totally cool, but you still need to have 10 sentences. If you need help coming up with ideas for that, feel free to message me!

› Your Character Biography is missing some Lore References! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! 

» https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

» https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charter

› Your characters Physical Description needs to have a little more detail. Add some weight, height, and change the eye color. Then you should be solid!

» https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

› Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

› Your character's Biggest Fear should be changed. Everyone has a fear of death because everyone has a natural aversion of death. If you need help coming up with ideas for the biggest fear, you can reach out to me!

› Make sure you list Two Things that your character likes about itself and two things your character doesn't like about itself. 

› Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action

› Not completing the changes within 24 hours.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord to zuziee#4323, and I recommend you join the LotC Discord using the following invite:

»https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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