Debitor666

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Lord of the Craft is set in a fantasy world with it’s own nations, history and geography – it isn’t at all like the real world. Any information you include in your character’s Backstory must fit with the server’s lore. This, of course, means that your character cannot be from Germany. You need to look at the server’s wiki or take a look around the server as a wandering soul (a non-whitelisted player) to get an idea of the server’s setting before you make any changes.
• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Your character’s Background is too vague and doesn’t give a good enough idea of what your character and their past has been like. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You need an appropriate and realistic Name that makes sense in the world of LotC. This is not meant to be your username, but the name of the character you create.
• Your character’s Description should consist of full sentences.
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks.
• Your character’s Appearance does not fit with the server lore for humans because humans don’t have red eyes like in your character description or purple eyes like in your skin. Your character description needs to match your skin anyway. 
• Your character’s Skin does not fit LotC’s medieval theme. You will need to change this before you can be accepted onto the server. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• Try and develop your response to the Roleplay Scenario more. Your character’s speech should seem natural and realistic but at the moment it seems a little robotic and not how somebody would actually speak. Also add something more than just speech to this, such as describing the manner or tone in which your character is speaking or something they are doing at the same time.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Lord of the Craft is set in a fantasy world with it’s own nations, history and geography – it isn’t at all like the real world. Any information you include in your character’s Backstory must fit with the server’s lore. This, of course, means that your character cannot be from Germany. You need to look at the server’s wiki or take a look around the server as a wandering soul (a non-whitelisted player) to get an idea of the server’s setting before you make any changes.
• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Your character’s Background is too vague and doesn’t give a good enough idea of what your character and their past has been like. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You need an appropriate and realistic Name that makes sense in the world of LotC. This is not meant to be your username, but the name of the character you create.
• Your character’s Description should consist of full sentences.
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks.
• Your character’s Appearance does not fit with the server lore for humans because humans don’t have red eyes like in your character description or purple eyes like in your skin. Your character description needs to match your skin anyway. 
• Your character’s Skin does not fit LotC’s medieval theme. You will need to change this before you can be accepted onto the server. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• Try and develop your response to the Roleplay Scenario more. Your character’s speech should seem natural and realistic but at the moment it seems a little robotic and not how somebody would actually speak. Also add something more than just speech to this, such as describing the manner or tone in which your character is speaking or something they are doing at the same time.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.