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    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: Vex#3867
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: doing or knowing anything outside of what your character could realistically know or do in any given situation
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: forcing a situation or action on others without having the proper reactions take place to determine its legitimacy
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

"Greetings good sir, I am Vallen Trey. I have come to this fine city to see what wonders it may possess, and perhaps a bite to eat *stomach grumbles*. Would you be so kind as to suggest a good place to get some food, I feel as though I am starving after this long journey. Thank you kindly for your assistance, I bid you good day and safe travels friend."


Character Name: Vallen Trey
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: height 6'2, shoulder length brown hair, brown eyes, stubble beard, lean build, sun kissed ivory skin
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Dislike needs to be two sentences!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Chronics#7490 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to your 24 hour editing period expiring 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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