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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: Stuperbee#0135
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Utilizing information in game/character that was aquired outside of the game/characters experiences.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Disregarding your characters limits and ignoring magic effects to be overpowered.
    Status: Denied
  • You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?” 
    How do you respond? 
 
*Mougz steps off a boat and is immediately hit in the face with foreign people, sights, and smells*
  *Noticing a strange man approach him, Mougz stares in confusion at the mans colorful clothes before realizing the man has said something to him*
*Unaware of what the man had just said to him and having found himself in this situation before, Mougz has rehearsed some words in his head that have helped him get by before*
 “OOGGHHH  Little One it is”.........*Sniffs the air*    “Colorful Cloths it is”.........” Mougz it is”........”Mougz come from far sands it is”...........”Mougz hungry  it is”.................”Mougz needs smells and food it is”......
 
*After Mougz has proudly communicated his name, where he's from, and that he is very hungry, it appears the man cannot fully understand him possibly due to his tusks and crude Orc voice*
*Mougz realizes he is getting nowhere and as he begins  to wander the man raises his left arm signaling to a wooden stand with freshly cooked animals seemingly for sale*
*Deighted, Mougz utters “Thankf little one it is......” And sets off toward the stand for some food*

Character Name: Mougz
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Standing a gargantuan, shaven 7'5 550lbs with one dull black eye and a destroyed tents cloth tied haphazardly around his waist stands Mougz.
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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming
  • In your backstory you stated that your character is an Olog, which is a race you cannot play before you join the server and ‘apply’ for it. San’Torr is also a city that no longer exist in LoTC.
  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits 
  • Your physical description needs to be redone- as the max height of an orc can only be 8’
  • Your roleplay response needs to be rewritten, as your actions need to be better described. For dialogue, use “quotations”.

When you have made the changes, feel free to

 contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

in our New Player Discord.

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming
  • In your backstory you stated that your character is an Olog, which is a race you cannot play before you join the server and ‘apply’ for it. San’Torr is also a city that no longer exist in LoTC.
  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits 
  • Your physical description needs to be redone- as the max height of an orc can only be 8’
  • Your roleplay response needs to be rewritten, as your actions need to be better described. For dialogue, use “quotations”.

You may reapply at any time.


 

 


 

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

do send a Community Team Member or myself a friend request over discord

and PM them or myself at @mightbepan#9864. I’d be more than happy to help.

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