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_Luckycharm_


_Luckycharm_
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: _Luckycharm_#9288
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: best way to get good
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you make your self powerfull I dont really know on that one
    Status: Denied

I search for new beginning a fresh start I wish to get loyal companions and form a team. I hope to guide them to a strong wise kind life.


Character Name: Lucky
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: silver hair and silver eyes and tan skin
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • Your Physical Description must match your skin.

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

  • Your Character’s Biggest Fear is a bit lacking. Must include explanation.

 

  • What your character likes most about themselves is a bit lacking. Must include explanation. 

 

  • What your character dislikes about themselves are a bit lacking. Must include explanation. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.    

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be in third person. 

 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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