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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: ♟ Rad1cal0utcast ♟#0353
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using Knowledge your character does not have or using outside knowledge.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: predetermining the outcome of your actions and trying to do things your character shouldn't be able to do
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I approach the man with a friendly demeanor and reach out to shake his hand. I respond "I simply come for adventure and to meet the lovely people of this city such as yourself." I check my equipment and make sure I have all my stuff on my  person. I then proceed  to ask "good sir could you show me to the nearest tavern or lodging for I am I need after that voyage." then I add "I still am not one to have found his sea legs just yet." having said this I give a slight friendly chuckle. Then I wait for the man to respond and prepare to follow him onward into the city.

Character Name: Silwen Albicore
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: 5"11 green eyes wearing some somewhat green adventuring gear 175lbs fairly athletic but tall and skinny with dirty blonde hair
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Your Character Biography cannot have any knowledge of or know how to use magic of any kind (the mana control). 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be in third person. 

 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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