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Authora17
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Author likes Space#1403
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To use the knowledge of the player to advance a character's own knowledge.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: To control another player's character without consent, without a chance for them to make a decision, or claiming a god-like power for no canon reason.
    Status: Denied

Luqe looks at the gentleman. “Ah yes, well I do hope do practice magic here. Trying to...” He pauses. “Oh, find a teacher of some sort. Might you know where I can find one?”


Character Name: Luqe Authora
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall, pale, almost dead looking. White hair with red streak. One completely black eye and one normal red eye. Wears a red trench coat and black pants.
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Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are alright I suggest you use an example for each to show you understand the concepts.
  • Your biography is a bit short, I suggest you have at least 10 complete sentences and two lore mentions. You mention having a curse that makes you lose control of your body in exchange for killer instincts as there is no lore for this on the server, you also mention wanting to learn magic in your application, please be aware that as of now there is no way of learning magic with the loregames going on.
  • Your physical description mentions looking as pale as a dead or having a red eye, this is not something common for humans so please make sure you know this.
  • Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
    • At least one positive trait: (Strength, skill, achievement)
    • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
    • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)
  • Your reply to the RP scenario is a bit simple, maybe add a bit more to it.

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply anytime after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

 

  • Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are alright I suggest you use an example for each to show you understand the concepts.
  • Your biography is a bit short, I suggest you have at least 10 complete sentences and two lore mentions. You mention having a curse that makes you lose control of your body in exchange for killer instincts as there is no lore for this on the server, you also mention wanting to learn magic in your application, please be aware that as of now there is no way of learning magic with the loregames going on.
  • Your physical description mentions looking as pale as a dead or having a red eye, this is not something common for humans so please make sure you know this.
  • Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
    • At least one positive trait: (Strength, skill, achievement)
    • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
    • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)
  • Your reply to the RP scenario is a bit simple, maybe add a bit more to it.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. 

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