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Rizzy

By Rizzy

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Rizzy#1695
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: having fun playing a game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Sweating hard in
    Status: Denied

highschool football captian with a gf and a brother and sister mom and dad are divorced

Character Name: Rizzy
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: brown hair 6'3 178 puonds body buider
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  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is a lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • What your character wants to achieve and fear need to both be two sentences!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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