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barryberkman0
  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: darkelly2013#7035
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: well if a friend messaged me and tolled me he got me a dimond sword and put it in my chest and i got online and had look my charcter would be in joy and suprise cause he had no idea some one put it there till he was tolled on local chat in person like.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: well if i got hit in the knee by and arrow my knee would be gone and i wouldnt be able to run but if i just got up and said im grand and started running that would be powergaming
    Status: Denied

hullo sir i am here to hopefully set a farm up and raise sheep and cows and hopefully one day children and meet a woman, do you know and guild that might show me around thanks friend.


Character Name: connor macleod
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: average looking with scars over his left eye brown hair white skin medium build right arm scard in fire 68 kg in weight green eyes armor and longsword
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Gnomeh. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Gnomeh#8321

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Gnomeh#8321]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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