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BONEZ
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: gaming at master level
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: gaming at pro level
    Status: Denied

Im Looking for a friend. 


Character Name: BONEZ98
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Tall Strong and muscular, Green skin, brown hair
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. W
  • Your Character Biography states that your character was the son of an old Orc Leader. This is not allowed as your character can not be royal/noble/well known or anything of the sorts. Please correct this! 
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Biggest Fear response must be two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Character's Dislikes response must be two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Character's Likes response must be two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

 


Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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