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BradHatta
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Brad#4936
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using player known information to a character's advantage who would not have otherwise had said advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Having an over-powered character to the point of it ruining the game.
    Status: Denied

Gilan planted his feet upon the dock and took in a deep breath of the salty air that was littered with the smog of the coals that ran the city’s industry. Before he could relax his stature from the deep sigh of respite, he was addressed by someone of the city. To the question, Gilan simply shook his head. “Not many aspirations. Mostly work, thank you. Where is an inn?” The seemingly absent-minded ranger responded without even making eye contact with the stranger. He simply scattered his gaze across the ports, taking in every bit of sensory information he could. The clangs of the anvils, the scents of fresh bread and charring seafood, it was all so much after being at sea for so long. He was ready to brave these newfound lands, and happy to begin his study of the place.


Character Name: Gilan Faerondaerl
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 342
Physical Description: Just above 6ft. His cloak encompases his entire form, from the cowl over his head down to his soft soled shoes. Silver-Blond Hair. Icy Blue/Hazel eyes
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As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things. Honestly I’m also quite stunned at the size of that biography

 

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you need 2 lore references. These are referrals to our game’s lore. These can be either nation names, events, or history

2

your definitions are a bit vague. Please rewrite them to be as detailed as possible

3

I’m unsure on who the Heru character is in your biography. Is he the lord as in an actual god? If so, that isn’t possible since we already have a select amount of deities in-game

 

 


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/RVUFzQK

 I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application 😄

 

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Whoops, looks like your application didn’t make the cut for the following reasons 😮

 

you did not make the necessary changes in time

 

BUT, have no worries, you can create another application immediately after! 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members →https://discord.gg/hVZEjcK

m I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application 😄

WIKI

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