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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is informing out of the game like a raid is happening and your off game and your friend says is being raided so now you know it being raided so you go there to the raid.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming makes you seem immortal or overpowered a example is "I slash his leg off" and how not to power game is saying that phrase like this "I attempt to slash his leg off".
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Woon found himself lost in a forest then he heard some sounds in the trees then he saw a thief popping out of a tree and charging at him the thief says: "Hey! what are you doing here" then Woon says: "Sorry im just lost" (With a high pitched voice) The Thief says: "What are you a clown with that voice i will lose a opportunity not robbing a clown" *Pulls out a Knife* Woon says: "Dont judge my voice" *His Bax pops out a top axe part and slashes at the thief* Thief says: "Argh ok ok clown" *stabs with his knife* Woon: *Blocks it with his bax but is injured by the knockback of the hit* "Dude leave me alone i just want to get out of this forest" *Deactivating his Bax* "Please" The Thief said: *Pulls back knife* "ok ok but lets do a deal i will lead you out of this forest but if you come back ever again i will kill you and dont tell this to anyone i dont want my reputation ruined" Woon says: Ok deal.

The thief leads him out of the forest and woon gets out and the thief stole some money from him. The End

 


Character Name: Woon Maliborg Smoth
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Pale Skin, Dark Brown Hair, Green Eyes, 4ft, Blacksmith Clothes, Beard and has a Banjo on his back (It might not be one the skin).
Screenshot of Skin:



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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

  • Kal'Urguan was the capital city of the Dwarves on a past continent that your character would not have been alive for, so I recommend updating this part of your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Please be sure to explain WHY your character developed their fear!

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should respond to the prompt given, so please be sure to correct this!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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