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Chester_Jester

By Chester_Jester

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Information that not the character but the player has.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Role-play as an overpower character with unfair benefits.
    Status: Denied
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My goals exceed your expectations. I'm on a merry Quest to find legendary weapon. My sources tell me it may be near by. Mind if I ask what you know of it? 

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: Jester, Child of Abyss
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Blond Hair, Green Eyes, Pale skin, No beard, Wears a red cloak with a wooden Mask.
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to the number of fixes that need to be made. Here is those fixes to make when you reapply!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Name states that 'child of abyss' is part of your character's full name. While Jester is a fine name, this extra 'title' on the end does not fit.
  • Your Character Biography is missing two lore references! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is too short, and seems to be just your character's personality traits as opposed to their backstory. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. You seem to have very modern clothing beneath the cloak, and the wooden mask seems far too bright. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. If this is meant to be his social awkwardness, this is not a significant negative trait-- perhaps if it was made somewhat more serious it would count, but not at the moment.
  • Your Biggest Fear includes two different fears and needs to be at least two sentences long. I would suggest only including one that is catalyzed by your character's backstory.
  • Your Character Likes, while technically two sentences, needs to be slightly longer.
  • Your Character Dislikes needs to be at least two sentences long.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, the dialogue being placed in quotes.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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