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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: clone_trooperYT#6945
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: "can you help?, being raided by goblins". chris"ok im loging on with help asap"
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

welcome dwarf  what brings you here. i am here to reclaim my home from a dragon and orcs


Character Name: Thorin
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: strong smart quick
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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