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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Create a background and a personality for your character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It could give away parts of the lore and disrupt the gameplay for everyone else.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"I heard about this place from a friend, he said the people here were welcoming to outsiders," I answered.

"How are you an outsider?" she asked.

I shrugged, "I was born in a elven kingdom, they accused my mother of having an affair and killed her. They came after me next so my father left me in the forest and some hunters found me. They raised me as their own until my kingdom found me somehow. They slaughtered everyone so I ran," I shuffled my feet in the dirt, "I had remembered one of the hunters telling me about a small town where I would be safe so I went searching until I found you. But it seems like you already know why I'm here."


Character Name: Aspen
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: 5'9, brown woolen shirt, brown trousers, soft sole boots, light blue hair and grey eyes, one eye lost its colour in a accident, athletic and muscular.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked (Elves cannot have blue hair). If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

  • Please elaborate more on the first prompt relating to powergaming so I know you understand the definition!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message sarahbarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at sarahbarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

: https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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