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ColdAs_Ice
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using outside Knowledge to benefit your character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is giving the other person no chance to make a decisions, such as "he would slash off his arm." instead of "He would attempt to slash off his arm"
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ventus DragonEyes
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 118
Physical Description: 6,2
Purple Hair
Muscular
Purple eyes slitted pupils
Tan
Handsome
Pointy ears
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  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please refer to the wiki pages provided. [Metagaming] [Powergaming]
  • Your characters backstory started well, but began to fall apart as you introduced the usage of magic and nonsensical character traits. Please remove the mentioning of lightning bolts, the God’s Blade and Lightning Warden, none of these things exist on Lord of the Craft. Alongside that, please expand on who your character is on a person, this is a much better approach than just trying to add powers to him.
  • Your character’s hair should not have lightning crackling within it.
  • Your character should not be one of these ‘Wardens’ and should not be able to wield an element, however, you may learn one of our evocations in game from a teacher once you’ve been accepted.
  • Please replace your ‘superhero’ weaknesses and strengths with things that will build your characters personality, our server is not about being the best or the most powerful, and isn’t ran on constant combat roleplay.

If you need any help with these changes, please contact me on Discord @pump action hex#4689, or join the New Player Discord through the link below.

https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Your application is now;

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  • Please fix up your skin so that it works with your characters backstory and the server’s setting. This means the clothing and hair colour.
  • Please include a reference to our servers lore, this could be a place of birth, an event, a religion or a culture that your character celebrates. These can be found on the wiki.

If you need any help please feel free to contact me and apologies that I missed these two out, was exhausted at the time of reviewing.

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