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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: rennie#3110
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Taking what people know from the real world and using it for online roleplay to create their character and story
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is making your character more powerful by not giving chances to others and maximizing your own powers to be better than others.
    Status: Denied

They felt a bit overwhelmed by the questions but answer  "uh hi! thank you.. uhm, well honestly.. i'm just trying to get as far from my home as possible.. a boat was there and i, well.. got in!" Looking around, they smile at the man. "This is a very beautiful place if i may say.." 

Character Name: Eren Apak
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: long green hair, dark brown eyes, 5ft 5inches, 120lbs. They wear a corset around their waist with a medium white dress and no shoes.
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ A Halfling is not the offspring of an Elf and a Human, but is rather a unique race of it’s own. Please change your Character’s race to either Elf or Human to represent the fact they are a Half-Elf.

 

→ Your Physical Description states that they have green hair. neither Elves nor Humans have green hair. Please change this.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as Half-Elves don’t have green hair. Please fix this accordingly!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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