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Rhehnan Hasher
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: CookieTheHammy#3435
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you use information to benefit your character that your character wouldnt know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you make your character do things during rp that give them advantages they would unrealistically have
    Status: Denied

Wow, i am here to make a town filled with peace. i dont want wealth or a adventure. I WANT PEACE! i wish that u join me in the finding of peace. i want to seek revenge for my parents


Character Name: Rhehnan Hasher
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall, Kind, Buff, Protective, Brave , blue eyes,
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

→ Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Physical Description must be purely physical! Don’t include any details about their personality!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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