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Coolgurl500
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: having your character do and say things as you figure them out yourself
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Acting like a god (which is unfair and rude in my personal opinion)
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I look at the strange man with blank eyes. "Which city am i in?" He tells me and I look around me. "I'm just here for the market. To buy a gift for a friend who has passed on from this world. She's a beautiful snowy white rabbit now so I'm gonna get her a charm necklace to wear." The man walks away thinking im the weirdest thing in this market and i proceed to pick out a beautiful charmed necklace and get back on the boat to go home.


Character Name: Vanya Gilwenys
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: light golden hair with a ring of flowers thin 5/3 and a half inches in height no more than 100 pounds soaking wet light blue eyes dark dress
Screenshot of Skin:



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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:

 


 

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Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!

 

You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly. 

 

Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:

  • Both your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions do not have enough detail, and do not accurately describe the concepts in question. Please revise over these and expand upon them, and consider using our wiki for the best and most relevant information.
  • Your biography includes no lotc lore references, nor does it create a character that can be well roleplayed on the server. You have to carefully consider how a Wood Elf would grow up - typically, they do not have betrothals in their culture. They also are not considered adults until they are 40 or so, so marriage at 18 is not a culturally accepted practice for the Wood Elves. I encourage you to rewrite your biography with specific consideration, and inclusion, of LOTC Lore.
  • A wood elf does not have fair skin or blonde eyes. This must be changed.

 

Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to. 

 

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If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

 


 

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason:

 

→ Well over twenty-four hours have passed without any changes being made to your application.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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