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CoolkidDirt
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: CoolkidDirt#6001
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To use ones outside game info to affect ones inside gaming experience.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Interacting with a game using board game tactics
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Zan Titanthorn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: A young man that looks fairly healthy. Light brown hair, brown eyes that look bloodshot. pieces of metal thrown together for a left arm.
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Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

 

  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed? (you can’t have a metallic arm.)
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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