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By 1Eira

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Wonderful Cat#6395
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I am honestly not entirely sure, but I think it's when an ongoing roleplay is occurring, and someone walks up at wants to join the roleplay. But instead of asking politely if they can join. They join in on the ongoing roleplay and start pretending to be part of the scene. when they have no relevant knowledge of what the plan is for the scene or what is going on. And it can very well ruin the player's fun and it can be quite annoying.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player carries out unrealistic, unfair, or godly powers, that the player shouldn't be able to do. Performing physical feats that an ordinary person couldn't do or is impossible in those circumstances. This applies to mental feats as well. (acting invincible) would be an example of power gaming...etc
    Status: Denied

It was a little past two in the afternoon, It was my first time visiting anywhere outside of my home in the Druide Order,  where my mom lived. My hands ached with excitement, and I counted up all of the things I could do in my head once I got into the city. I was left in awe by the countless ideas when a man approached me, he was well dressed and wore a finely tailored suit with gold and brass buttons. He smiled to me and said

 

"Welcome, what brings you to our lovely city? is it our collection of antiques from all regions of the world? Is it our wide selection of food? Or is it for our shopping? We have some of the finest clothing shops in this part of the world." He said as he brought me closer to the city to point out the views.

 

"Wow," I replied...to the man

 

"How could anyone build such a beautiful city" I wondered to myself how long it must have taken to build and all of the labor that it had required. 

 

i rubbed my head, and let out a deep sigh...before asking the man where the nearest inn was located. 

 

He gestured to an area a few feet away from the boat I had just arrived on...I thanked him and then I went on my way. 

Character Name: Eira
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Brown hair, turquoise eyes, lightish/tan skin, height 5'3...
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography states your persona was born in Altas. Unfortunately, Altas is an old map and your persona is much too young to have experienced it. So instead, please change Atlas to Almaris.

  • Additionally, your Character Biography mentions the Empire of Man. Unfortunately, that too was on an old map. The modern equivalent to such would be the Holy Orenian Empire.

  • Your Character Biography mentions your persona's parent being a druid. I would remove this. Noting that she cares greatly for the environment, perhaps she can simply be an environmentalist. 

  •  Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. Please only emote for yourself and make sure your response includes one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

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Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.


 

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

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Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

 

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