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CrossColt243
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: taking OOC knowledge and then in character "magically" gaining said knowledge
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: acting god-like and not letting anyone respond
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

looks at the man "hello, I'm just looking for a comfortable place to stay and rest. .. for a reasonable price obviously" chuckles while fidgeting with her fingers.


Character Name: Ker Avern
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: dark grey skin/white hair/violet eye red eye/torn purple top/red vest/torn purple bottoms with red sash and belt/brown boots/leather head band
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Character Name includes the last name of an already-existing notable family that is not open to new members. You may not start as a part of an existing family without the head’s permission. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX  

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

 

  • You did not make the necessary changes within the 24-hour editing period. However, don't stress- you can always reapply again!

 



After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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