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DamienTC

By DamienTC

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: DamienTC#1660
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using info outside of RP into gain an advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: making it seam like your impossible to kill. example: telling someone u can fly for an advantage
    Status: Denied

hello sir, im just looking for a inn or somewhere to stay for the night i have a big day tomorrow i need to find a job and find  a home, do u know where i can find a place to eat i just rode my horse 50 miles and im starving for some steak and potatoes

Character Name: Delvis Dru
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: 6 foot 1 inch red hair. blue eyes. a built body not to strong tho. wears something over his face usually a hood and a mask
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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