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DarkRose360
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you take information that your character doesn't know and using it to your advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you attack someone without giving the other person a chance to react
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Mifuyu Fuyuka
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: White hair tied into a ponytail, purple eyes, and a long light blue dress
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  • Your definitions are correct, but I’ll just ad a little something.
    • Power-emoting does nt have to be attacking related. It could be anything- so make sure every action is an attempt. We also have build in /roll commands, that can help.
  • You have only one reference of lore in your biography.
    • The current city of snow elves is named tahu'lareh, not Talar'ikur.
    • Remember to include another reference of lore too.
  • I’d argue that the character name really isn’t suitable for a snow elf- it sounds more japanese, but I won’t ask you to change it if  you wish to keep it.
  • Remember that 21 is a very  young age culturarly for an elf. Keep that in mind.
  • Your description needs elaborating on. Height, build- these things can all be added. What will people see at a first glance?
  • Your interesting facts should be more about traits as opposed to skills.
    • Lists of traits are super easy to find online, and there’s tonnes of them!

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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