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dilara.vdw

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Dilara#9733
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i don't totally understand this something with when ur in and out of ur role play Character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: if u make urself godly and over powered sm that it don't follows the lore rules anymore
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

hello kind sir, I have stranded here from far. I am on an adventure to find myself and discover who I am and what my purpose is. I would love to talk to you more and maybe you can tell me about this city?

(the skin is a zenitsu skin but its kinda how I expected her to look like)

Character Name: sunny
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: shes 170 cm tall, has brown shiny hair and hazel eyes. she's pretty skinny and does not have many curves. she is very very light toned but mostlywhite
Screenshot of Skin:
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→  Your Biography must include at least one lore reference.
Some helpful links might be here: Main Page

 

→ You can NOT start your persona Biography from nobility or royalty

→ Your Skin should match your Physical description

→Your Meta Gaming definition is incorrect.

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks Must include at least one significant disadvantage.

→Your persona’s Drive must link back to your Biography.

→ Your Persona’s Fear must be at least two sentences long

→ Your persona’s Fear must link back to your Biography.

→ Your Role Play scenario must be four sentences long

→Your Role Play scenario must Include at least one action

→Your Role Play scenario must include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord mady#9397. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

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