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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: D.link sky#6541
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: MetaGaming is using things that happen outside the game to change what your character is going to go or influences your characters action in the server
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is trying to make your character a god or super overpowerd
    Status: Denied

I would say "Hello" in a quiet tone with my hand ready to grab My nail, Then I would say In a somewhat normal tone "I'm looking for a place to stay for the night and to buy first aid items" and then continue on into the port letting my hand calm down, as well as lowering my adrenaline.


Character Name: The Mantis Knight (Mantis)
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Pale skin, Red hair and red eyes. A copper chestplate, Black cloak and trousers, along with worn-Greaves and a Nail he is 1 foot 6 inches and 10 Ibs
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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  • Your physical description is a bit off-target! While Halflings are indeed much shorter and less heavy than regular humans, they still are much, much larger than a human baby.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • In your physical description, it does not make sense that your eyes would be reddened. To circumvent this, should you choose to keep it, a reference to albinism could be added to the application- although that should be reflected both in your roleplay and physical description.
  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.



 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Lickspittle#3413]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Lickspittle to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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