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Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please change these (Maybe add examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Aegis is a map/continent from long ago that has been vacated for several hundred years in game. Your character would not have been able to live there. Please look for places from the previous map of the server, ‘Atlas’, which was only vacated several in game years ago or the current map, ‘Arcas’, for places they might have been recently. Laurelin is also a place from a previous map. You’ll have to change these before your application can be accepted.

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  While this is not necessary to change, I wanted to make sure that you are aware your character’s age means that they will be considered something like a child or adolescent in most elven cultures. Generally speaking, elves aren’t considered adults until they are at least 50 years old.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

You failed to make the changes required within 24 hours.

Please also make the changes below in your next application.

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please change these (Maybe add examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Aegis is a map/continent from long ago that has been vacated for several hundred years in game. Your character would not have been able to live there. Please look for places from the previous map of the server, ‘Atlas’, which was only vacated several in game years ago or the current map, ‘Arcas’, for places they might have been recently. Laurelin is also a place from a previous map. You’ll have to change these before your application can be accepted.

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  While this is not necessary to change, I wanted to make sure that you are aware your character’s age means that they will be considered something like a child or adolescent in most elven cultures. Generally speaking, elves aren’t considered adults until they are at least 50 years old.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.