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By Beluga

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is using out of rp knowledge as in rp knowledge to give your character an unfair advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-Gaming is when you give an unfair advantage over others such as dodging all attacks, making attacks unblock/dodgeable, or making attacks cause instant death.
    Status: Denied

Galethar was abruptly taken from his quiet contemplation of the city about him. Normally he would have ignored the blundering, what he assumed to be a human given their demeanor. However, the clothing of the man gave the impression he might be of some importance, so Galethar decided to humor them. “Indeed, what am I here for? Perhaps to be questioned by some imbecile on the docks? No, I seek something you couldn’t begin to imagine in your short little life. You could say it is a ‘wealth’ of sorts, a wealth of wisdom and knowledge. That is all I care to share with one so rude and interrupting. Now, if we are quite done, I have as many better things to do as I can count in a lifetime, and if you’d kindly step aside I could begin getting to them. Thank you.” With that Galethar bowed in as much of an over dramatic way possible and waltzed passed the man, shooting a glare at any nearby people who had heard his speech.

 

 

Character Name: Galethar Frenarius
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 61
Physical Description: Galethar is 6 feet two inches tall and weighs 190 pounds with a slim build. He has goldish amber eyes and blonde hair, he wears light armor and robes.
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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

  • Your Skin is inaccurate to your Physical Description. Please review what you’ve written and make the necessary changes. If you need further assistance finding a new skin, please refer to our Skin Archive.
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
  • In your Character Biography, it states your character’s parents knew about the ‘Legend of the Golden Pools’. The Golden Pools were around in Aegis and Asulon, which means there is no way that your character’s parents would know about them. Please have a re-read through the Wiki page about the Golden Pools.
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Golden_Pools
  • In your Character Biography, you state that your character has ‘completed his basic schooling and apprenticeship as a magician’. Due to application rules, New Player Characters are not allowed to have any form of magic training written into their backstories as it is a form of powergaming. Please alter this when making revisions. 
  • Just an FYI, your character believing he is superior to other races but not being a supremacist is contradictory. They mean the same thing. I suggest editing the wording if this is not what you intended.

 

When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

For additional help, please view the following wiki/forum links:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Haelun'or_Settlement_Guide
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Magic

 

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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to failing to revise your application on time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • All points mentioned in the above Pending comment.
     


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

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