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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: RickiTickiBobbiWhobbin#3199
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Your own information that my player should not use
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Immortal creature
    Status: Denied

Had to start searching for food and people to trade with so he could survive. This is why he is spending time above the ground but tries to stay down as much as possible. 

Character Name: Giruri Minejaw
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: short, blue eyes, red hair and colorful outfit
Screenshot of Skin:
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sarahbarah

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! (Eye colour)

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

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