E3F5

• Your Metagaming definition is partially correct but is only one example of what it is. You need to give the actual definition. Please refer to our to find LotC’s accepted definition (just remember not to plagiarise!).
• Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least two valid server Lore References in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• The character Description field should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features. This is a description of what other players can see when they look at your character.
• Your character’s interesting Facts & Traits must be written as full sentences of at least five words.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Thanks

• You need to put more effort into your application. Write full sentences and make sure that your character’s backstory makes sense and actually gives a sense of your character’s personality/history rather than just a jumble of random facts.
• Please refrain from using cliches such as your character’s parents died and they want revenge. This makes for a bland and boring character and is a little overdone. You can still use a similar framework but try and distinguish them a little more.
• Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them. Don’t just state random facts, write a cohesive backstory that gives your character some history/personality. It only needs to be brief.
• Your Lore References are invalid. Asulon is a past map that has been vacated for centuries on the server and your character wouldn’t have been alive when it was around. Kal’Bogrin has also been vacated for centuries making it impossible for your character to have been there. Your character is old enough to have been to Kal’Azgaryum, but this city has since been vacated when the server fled the previous map/continent ‘Atlas’ to arrive at the current map, ‘Arcas’, so your character cannot live there currently. Feel free to ask for information in the new player discord if you’re having trouble finding valid lore references or you would like help to better understand parts of the server lore. 

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

yea I am just gonna give up

@E3F5 Hi! This Staff went on Hiatus, I’ll be handling this app now. If you’ve still given up, please tell me and I’ll deny this app.

Your application has been

Due to: Player Request.

You may reapply in whenever.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire)