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Ailith
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: A power that is not mixed with the game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: excludes the rp part of the game
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ailith Salices
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Sharp ocean blue eyes,white long flowing hair, a short 5'4 woman
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