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    Discord: ekeyts#6549
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowledge or wisdom that your character should not know about to act in a manner that is more beneficial. This is a problem, as your character is acting out of place and with omniscience.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Your character completes unrealistic feats that they should not be capable of doing, or are saved by some sort of power that they cannot justify possessing. This would include any deus ex machina, or any other type of convenient miracle.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

He scans the area around himself before walking closer to the gentlemen. “Do you know of a place where I can get a weapon fix?” He reveals a long dagger with a huge crack down the middle of the blade. “My friend here needs a little touch up. I trust that you know of a place?”


Character Name: Cerus Ilari
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 5'5", 120 lbs, dark brown hair, grey eyes, dark leather armor and hood
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please change it or find a new one, and refer to our Skin Archive if you need help.
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks needs to have a significant negative trait. 
  • Your Character Biography has several issues:
    • You need to include two lore references in your backstory.
    • Your character appears to carry around a reputation, and therefore has a form of notoriety. This is not allowed, and we encourage reputation to be earned in-character once you are accepted. 
    • Your character undergoing a ‘mental transformation’, while somewhat possible, is overdone and seems to downplay the importance of mental health and well-being-- without having any effect whatsoever on the character’s mindset and is therefore unrealistic. 
    • Your character having the reputation, known or unknown, of killing someone of importance i.e a noble is not allowed to be pre-written into a backstory.
  • One last thing to touch on, you mention in your Character Biography how he was born in the Golden City of Ves- which does not line up with current server lore. To be born where Ves used to be 20 years ago, your character would have been born in Owynsburg. 
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Owynsburg


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

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