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    Discord: Entitaneo70_pacifist#5682
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is when you use external thing other than the game to knowing thing that your character cant know, like using wiki to made you character know thing he didnt know in the first place, this can ruin the experience for other onest player that dont want to use metagaming, its like cheating in a test.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is when you give your character godlike power over other for no reason at all, like make your character insta-kill or making him a literal god, an exemple is making your character killing all his enemy in one attack because he is the "chosen one over every other person"
    Status: Denied

Eravern thanks and ask who is the man that aproached him, after the man response eravern explains that he is here for studies and klowlege, after talking for a bit about the city eravern walks away from the man and go to a shop and ask if they have some food to sell, after buying some bread eravern starts walking around waching the big city around him and aproach another man asking for a library or some sort of book storage, he tels him to go left in the city, eravern thanks and start walking to the library, eventually he will trip due to his fake leg stucking among two rocks, he gets up and in front of him he find an orc walking around, scared he start walking faster to the library until he enter it.


Character Name: Eravern
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 72
Physical Description: tall but not physically strong, fast in running short distances but not long distances
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ You can not know magic without learning it in character on the server! Please clarify that your character doesn’t know magic, and just wants to learn!

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions a common trope: Orc attacks! Please remove this trope, and replace it with something more unique, or ever better, from the lore!

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as Elves do not have purple eye-whites. Please fix this accordingly!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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