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Fedo_Sarto

By Fedo_Sarto

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: <§Fedo_Sarto§>#0047
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it's a term used to identify a player that uses out-of-roleplay knowledge to manipulate the storyline.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it's a term used to identify a player that always tries to advantage their character and manipulate others.
    Status: Denied

Good Afternoon! I'm here for adventure, i've been surviving my whole life.
Before i forget, do you know where i can find a place to stay for the night?

Character Name: AredHel Marcus
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: he's tall, no hair, yellow eyes and black skin. He has sharp teeth and long canines. his Ears are really long and he wears a crown and a cape.
Screenshot of Skin:
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Melpomenne

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. High Elves can not have black skin.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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