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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Say I knew a plot secret OOC, and it would help my character. Metagaming is pretending like my character knows that IC.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is saying I do this, instead of I try to do this. For example, I chop of your head, instead of I swing my sword at your head.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Lileard
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A tribal goblin
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  You cannot use lore, places, powers or religions from lore outside of what exists on LOTC. Please refer to our wiki and use current server lore.

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however they are very vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these (Maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarise)

Ø  /msg is an OOC chat channel. This means that roleplay is not done through this, and therefore your character could not ‘speak’ through /msg.

Ø  Your character’s appearance and skin does not fit the lore for dark elves, please change this.

Ø  Please add more detail to your three interesting facts, and try not to make them simply personality traits

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivory#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!


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You’ve used some very modern ideas- ‘police’ as such did not exist in medieval times.

You’re lacking the one required lore reference- this could be a city name, world event or similar from our LOTC lore.

Flesh Worms do not exist in LOTC

Your character description should detail the physical appearance of your character, in accordance to your skin

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