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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: Glitch303#1653
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming - Using outside information, that your character wouldn't have otherwise known, in roleplay as if you had known.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming - When someone makes choices and decisions for other players that are role playing.
    Status: Denied

As Lander steps off the shaking boat, he takes a deep breath taking in all the various details of the city. A slight breeze reminded him he needed to keep moving forward. As he passed all the unique shops and stalls, he spotted an old man begging for money on the side of the road. Lander suddenly remembers the tragic events that occurred to him whilst still a mere child and tosses him a few coins. Still wandering the city, a very well-dressed gentleman approaches Lander with a large smile from ear to ear. The man looks at Lander and says, “Welcome!”. Lander puts his palm up to him and says “I don’t have time for this”. The man starts to say something more, something to make the lone man talk to him. However, the uncaring tone of Lander’s voice was enough for the well-dressed man to realize that they weren’t having any social time.  Lander immediately saw how well that man was dressed and naturally assumed that the gentleman was going to waste his precious time.

Character Name: Lander Stonolo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Leather armor, large hat (with ace of spades on it), dark green eyes, blonde hair, medium build, 262 lbs, 6'2.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Physical Description

  • Personality/Quirks

    • Don’t really see a negative or a positive trait here this needs to be expanded upon as Lander isn't fond of the rich and he is atheist. If there is a rebellion against the rich, he is in.   This is not really a negative or positive thing about the character.

  • Roleplay Scenario

    • Doesn't really show me how you character acts, or behaves as he just passes through. This needs to expanded upon as it seems little effort was put into this, please make it a minimum of four sentences and show me how your character act’s and speaks.

  • Bio

    • Atlas was was over 38 years ago in RP so there is no way a 32 year old character could have been born there. This needs to be changed and updated more info on the current timeline could be found at https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Real_Date_to_IG_Year_Calendar#Atlas

    • You are missing two accurate lore references, these can be found going through the human subform on LOTC forum page or going through LOTC Wiki and expanding more on your character background.

    • Your bio is very contradicting, it talks about heists but then talking about Lander being set on being a blacksmith and simply doesn't make more sense and needs to have more thought and time put into it. 

  • Skin

  • Is not up to LOTC standards please refer to the https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Powergaming

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Cad518#8811, and I recommend you join the LOTC Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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