Gelatina2a

Unfortunately your application to the server has been denied, due to the reasons listed below:

>Your descriptions of metagaming and powergaming are impressively vague, and I would recommend re-reading the rules and looking further into their definitions.

>Your character’s backstory is only a sentence long. Try to lengthen it to better understand your persona.

>Your character cannot start with magic: using water and talking to animals would be something she cannot do, off the bat.

>Your character cannot start by being incredibly powerful: perhaps being an assassin was something she aspired to one day be, but did not become.

>”Shadow Rose” is not exactly an elven name. See this guide on ancient elven for a better understanding of the language.

> Snow elves, in appearance, do not have brown hair, but instead typically pale/white hair. Please read this guide on snow elves for a better understanding of their appearance and culture. For more information on Fenn, the ‘snow kingdom’, please view this guide here.

>Your character’s personality traits are very brief- try listing more, and think about what would be realistic given her backstory.

>Your roleplay scenario is too short. Please have a minimum of four sentences, including at least one line of dialogue and one action.

You’re more than welcome to try again and resubmit a new application. If you have any further questions, we do have a new player discord!, or you can contact me personally at #dream9012.