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GumballWatterson
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: scrubdragon#1911
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Gaining outside knowledge from a friend or something about in-game happenings, and using it to your advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character do things that your character shouldn't logically be able to do, to gain an advatage.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

“Adventure, my friend.” I gaze around at the bazaar, looking where to go next. “I’m tired of my life, looking for something new. Care to help?”


Character Name: Lizalfos
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Red hair. Light-brown eyes. Reddish cape, gray, worn pants, dirty clothes and hands. 5'10", 140lb, athletic skinny build.
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

I. Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

II. There are several issues that need to be fixed within your biography.

a. Mali’aheral are high elves, yet every other part of your application states you are a wood elf.

b. Elves are naturally infertile, and find it difficult to have children--therefore your character couldn’t have had 9 siblings.

c. Laurelin is an ancient settlement that is long destroyed. Your character could not have lived there.

d. Caerme’onn is an existing seed and you would need permission from the head of the family to be a part of them starting out.

e. Taynei'Hiylu was a heavily work in progress piece of lore that I believe was never added. Please remove the reference to her in your biography.

f. The Great War is not an event that happened. If you have a link to lore on the wiki that references it, you are more than welcome to send it my way and I can reconsider allowing this reference.

g. Having a ”token Dark Elf friend” is grounds for instant denial--or a token anything friend for that matter. Please refrain from using such a term in your biography.

h. Aeldin is a sort of tall tale. No one really knows if it’s real or not. As such, please do not reference having lived there.

 

III. Your character cannot be named Lizalfos, as that is the name of a species of monster within The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild. Please try to be original with your character name, and Google “wood elf fantasy name generator” if you are struggling to come up with a name.

 

IV. Wood elves with reddish, auburn, or ginger hair are fine--outright red hair is not a natural wood elven hair color. Wood elves cannot have purple eyes, either.


V. Your character needs one negative personality trait at the least.

 

VI. Your roleplay scenario requires two actions and two pieces of dialogue from your character--you have not met this requirement.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @UwUPlant#0017, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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